Monday, January 11, 2010

Microfiction Monday

Susan at Stony River hosts Microfiction Monday. Her posted picture is a prompt to compose a story in 140 characters. This is Susan's picture followed my my microfiction story. The warm light beckoned. Cloaked in darkness and fear, she hesitated. Alas, familiarity prevailed.
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13 comments:

Sylvia K said...

Oh, good one! Carol! Glad you joined the fun and it is fun! Hope your week is off to a good start!

Sylvia

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

This was good Carol, I think we all been in places like this.

Thanks for visiting the blog today.

Peggy said...

I really like you take oon the weeks picture! They are all so different, that's part of the fun!

Brenda's Arizona said...

So fun to see you jumping in! This is a great one, too!

Janie said...

I wouldn't go out there! I'm sure an alligator is just around the bend!
Fun micr-story with suspense.

Thom said...

Thank you for stopping by my playground. Much appreciated. Well done my friend. Excellent story for the picture. Love it :) Have a great Monday :)

Susan at Stony River said...

Isn't it too true -- the choice we make too often in life! I loved this moment with her, and what a wonderful take on the photo. Excellent!

Deb said...

I like it Carol...

SouthLakesMom said...

Oh rats! I was hoping she would overcome her tendency to dwell in reality and take a leap of fancy! Maybe next time!

Kay said...

It's my first time, too. This is so much fun. Great job with yours!

hope said...

Ah, mysterious! I like that! Ones like these make me want to yell, "Well go on, finish the story!"

Hope to read you next week.

Your EG Tour Guide said...

The story made me smile! ;-)

Rajesh said...

Wonderful shot and lovely narration.